Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world. Other people, however, believe that scientists have the greatest influence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is no doubt that some of the most influential people around the world came from political or scientific backgrounds. Politicians hold the greatest power while scientists are the most knowledgable people. Owing to these traits, it quite difficult to determine whether the former or the latter have the greatest impact among people. I’d like to discuss several enormous influences of both characters first and then address my personal opinions.
Politicians are powerful people. They affect the world not only by political but also economic and military means. Presidents and kings of nations...
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it quite difficult to determine
it is quite difficult to determine
would on the opposite safes uncountable lives.
would on the opposite saves uncountable lives.
Sentence: Politicians hold the greatest power while scientists are the most knowledgable people.
Error: knowledgable Suggestion: knowledgeable
Sentence: Firstly, eventhough what politicians and scientists do could both improve the life of human, the former only make the world better based on existing knowledge.
Error: eventhough Suggestion: No alternate word
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