As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?
Human is one of the very smart species and had lot development during past year according to the requirement and ease of life. Today I would like to explain how the development is at very best. In modern era we have a lot of fast travel sources ex: cars, motorbikes, buses, trains and planes. Cars are really important part of our lives, without car we even cannot imagine our life. Cars are best and fast way to travel and cars are available for every class.
First of all we will discuss about the advantages of cars. Back in 1850 the research on making cars had been success when the Mr. Henry Ford had introduced the first car of the century. People want to buy that kind of cars which requires no horses. It is also very safe and fast as compare to horse carts. After some time the cars industry had a boom and other rivalries into the market. If compare today’s cars has very good options including safety and luxury.
In the survey which is taken place on 2018 the report said people spent more money than any other thing on the cars. Cars are very comfortable to travel and other functions like Air condition and music system makes our trip memorable. Also it is safe way to travel to anywhere around the country.
On the other hand there are some disadvantages for the environment. The people of world are becoming more rich and wealthier than past times. Every individual want to become rich man and try to show off to other people. The more than 50% of populations has owned the cars. If we talk about United States there are more 50 millions of cars travel on daily basis. It has a very bad impact on the natural environment like oxygen very polluted as compare to past time. Although industrialization is also big a threat to the environment. I would suggest not to use cars for small trips we can use public transport or sharing basis transport to travel to offices or work places. Human is using things as per his comfort but we need to remember that the environment is also very crucial for us and other animals who lives in the same planet.
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- As countries develop more and more people buy and use their own cars Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment 79
- As countries develop more and more people buy and use their own cars Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment 72
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sources'' or 'source's'?
Suggestion: sources'; source's
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Suggestion: Also,
... music system makes our trip memorable. Also it is safe way to travel to anywhere ar...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48806366048 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35988122451 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541114058355 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0499211807 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.5652173913 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3913043478 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21739130435 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228075061589 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621665466737 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494730574263 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126251813591 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671930738808 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.