A local college want people with a job to come and talk to students about
what it is like to work. You would like to do this.
Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter
• Explain what you would like to talk about
• Say why students would be interested in your job
• Suggest a possible date and time for the talk
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my interest in addressing the students of your institution regarding their future job expectations by giving examples from my own experience.
Since I have joined a Multi-National Company, after pursuing my Bachelor's degree in Technology, two years back, I believe that I would be able to give proper insights to the work culture in the industry. I would also like to provide some useful information regarding the changes that could be expected when entering into a full-time working environment after completing college studies.
As a majority of the students are in the computer science department, they could relate to my experience and would take an interest in my job. Moreover, they would also benefit from some of my tips to select the optimum projects to boost their learning curves even while working.
If possible, I would like to pay a visit to the students next Friday, 7 August. I could come either in the morning at 10 or in the afternoon at 2. Please suggest me the appropriate time to schedule my visit.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Tara
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-08-07 | Jaskaran Kaur | 91 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to express my interest in a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84259255082 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3558337287 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208836340434 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774696433026 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595942453182 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101275067849 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033250126982 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.