Many people believed that woman make better parents than men and that this is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just good as women at parenting.
Write an essay expressing your point of view.
Women are believed to be the best choice for nurturing their children among some people, while others hold the view that men are better parents for their children. I personally believed that for upbringing children both mother and father have crucial role. In this essay I will put forth some reasons to support my view before arriving at conclusion.
If the parents want to bring a safe place for treating their children with a little effort, children should be taken care with both parents mother and father. Although there are numerous single parent family which raising successful children, both parents together can easily meet their children primary needs. Despite the fact that, nowadays, both parents have been working outdoors, various request can be responded by mother and father. For instance, mothers are always identified kind and patient creature which each child has close relationship with them. The need of food and cloth are met and recognized by mothers especially in infant in most cases. When it comes to financial issues, fathers have had extend horizons. Therefore each child‘s request can be responded by each parent quickly.
Another compelling reason for my position is, not only are normal families more efficient for caring children,but also each mother and father can do their responsibilities in ease. When children have risen under both parents attention, their parents can put enough time aside for working on their personal ambitious. At a result their children can experience better life with excellent parents. For example, in homes which have both parents, children can receive consideration and kindness from their parents. Due to parents have enough free time, because responsibilities are divided.
In sum up, considering above argument, each child in best situation need caring both parents. Hardly will life be managed with single parent. Mother, father and children will be satisfied and tasted happiness, when they share responsibilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...onclusion. If the parents want to bring a safe place for treating their children...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37179487179 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62825984934 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1686720728 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1111111111 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195993611369 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713326204691 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518521926605 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135370105391 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688253967115 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.