Dear Ms. Rustom,
How are you? I hope you and your family are fine. I am writing to request you to provide me a reference letter as I am applying for a job in the upcoming week. As per the company’s policy, a reference letter from an educational institution is mandatory wherein any Diploma / PGDM course is done.
I have applied at Barclays as a Personal Assistant to the Executive Vice President. My job profile includes calendar management, noting minutes, travel management, making spreadsheets and presentations and other assistance as required. As you are aware, I had completed my Diploma course last September which covered all these duties and was awarded ‘A’ grade.
As you have taught me, you know very well that I was really looking forward to work at Barclays. The company has very good reputation and has an employee-friendly environment. It is also quite near to my house and the job role works best for me.
The reference letter should mention my course details in brief, my grade and course duration. I would also like you to mention some qualities about me and how I have been academically during the course.
Thank you for your precious time and co-operation. Please let me know when I could collect the reference letter from you.
Yours sincerely,
Preeti
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'letters'.
Suggestion: letters
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, really, so, well, in brief, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 3.85567010309 363% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97247706422 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87490702214 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628440366972 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3103500683 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2666666667 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5333333333 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320146355623 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105091791628 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800935391567 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182439057083 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114466772632 0.0580467560999 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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