The international community must act immediately to ensure all nations to reduce the consumption of fossil fuel ( gas and oil ). To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In this developing world, with the utilization of multiple types of automobiles or for running industries, the demand of fossil fuels are increasing day by day. So, it is thought that to overcome this problem, international communities must take the necessary actions to lower its usage at the global level. I agree with this notion, I believe certains precautions can be taken to limit the extra consumption of natural gas and oil in order to perseve them for future use.
To begin with, natural resources like coal and petrol are utilizing for human puposes to a large extent . With the advent of the technology, abundant of vehicles manufactured everyday and for their efficient working energy is required which is obtained from petrol. However,if its overuse cannot be controlled then reservoirs get depleted and our future generation cannot get sources to generate energy.
However, there is a need to take effective measures to reduce its overconsumption and prevent it from depletion. It can be done through Campaigns that can educate the individual about the adverse consequences of extra consumption of natural gases and how to prevet its overconsumption. Moreover, the government can shift the burden of natural energy sources to reneuable sources like wind, solar and tides .
To conclude, today reducing the excessive use of fossil fuels is a concerned issue which can be resolved through limiting the use of energy sources for human purposes, creating individual awareness and most importantly developing other sources of energy which can be rebuild easily
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92837516011 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6025209416 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103338631569 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396281696765 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351480994091 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0608133116654 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503409449872 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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