Technology has advanced a lot in last few decades, it has created a huge impact in our day to day life. Computers are shown to be a great deal in a child's life, which has both good and bad effect on them. I agree that digital technology has helped children to acquire knowledge, however over use of the same has lead to some detrimental effects like lack of social behavior, bad eye sight and few more.
Computers have proved to be one of the most important platform for sharing knowledge easily and quickly. Every student uses computer in their daily life to gain enough data on any subject. These days even small children at age of 5 started using computer to learn coding.
Many things now a days can be done using online programs on computers. For instance, a lot of international activities especially international dance style are being conducted online, that can help students to learn from their home country.
Along with benefits, comes some side effects too. Young people are more prone in getting addicted to such technology, if left unsupervised. Other than educational activities, teenagers get addicted to games, surfing and social media, which has created a lot of ill effects on them. More computer timing have shown less human interaction in these young generation, which affects there communication skills, and more screen time also causes bad eye sight, which is again very common in young children. In a research conducted by oxford university, ratio of myopia in children under age of 15 have increased drastically in last 10 years and this is due to more screen timings.
In conclusion, there are many advantages of using a computer, however it should be limited to a certain amount of time a day. Also, to overcome the bad eye sight problem, protective eye glasses can help this situation to reverse.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 380, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...fects like lack of social behavior, bad eye sight and few more. Computers have proved ...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to code'.
Suggestion: to code
...ge of 5 started using computer to learn coding. Many things now a days can be done...
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Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...mputer to learn coding. Many things now a days can be done using online programs on co...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...er to learn coding. Many things now a days can be done using online programs on co...
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Line 7, column 444, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...s, and more screen time also causes bad eye sight, which is again very common in young ch...
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Line 9, column 153, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...f time a day. Also, to overcome the bad eye sight problem, protective eye glasses can hel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91639871383 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67006517586 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610932475884 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3013976773 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.933333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253468413439 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760654307049 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442958173609 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122054658575 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587615035377 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.