Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
The pollution rate of every nation is increasing at such a high rate, giving rise to global warming, acid rains, holes in the ozone layer and various other complications that have made us count the days we have left. It is no surprise that the humans are the reason for such drawbacks. Being a developed country is a dream of every under-developed and developing countries and the country makes use of every possible resources they can to make that happen. But doing so at the cost of puting our life at risk is unfavorable. In my opinion, I am partly in favor of the prompt and I would state my response with the following reasons.
At the moment every nation is in a race to increase their economy and become self-reliant by getting rid of all the debt they own. In doing do they all have gone as far as to use every square inch of land they have and hence have destroyed the natural vegetation to make residential building or even factories to increase their economy. One would find this reasonable keeping in mind their countries current situation. Countries like Uganda, who have struggled to increase their economy, have taken steps to deforest the wilderness and set up factories and warehouses. The nations have made such decisions for their own selfish needs. Barren lands, being highly unproductive, could be treated and developed into power plants or warehouses that proved rather fruitful. Being said that, making use of a lifeless land for the enhancement of the nation is not a misjudgment, but preserving the ecosystems that have a variety of animal species living must be reckoned.
However, in the name of development and technology, many nations have vandalized the natural vegetation to make extensive towns and cities and transform it to a concrete jungle. This has not only hindered the natural resources but also snatched away homes of animals that were surviving there. Developing an inhabited region could benefit the nation economically but doing so at the cost of jeopardizing the lives of the living organisms that live there is impetuous. A nations’ economy could be increased by sustaining the environment. For example, the government could take steps to encourage buying by increasing the income of the employees. Sometimes the working classes of the society barely make ends meet working for minimum wages and have no money left to have a better standard of living. And increasing the income will persuade them to buy additional supplies that they hesitated to buy before. The economy can also be boosted by increasing employment and making as many jobs available. Entrepreneurs who are in need of investment could also be granted loans by the government and encourage them to broaden their business locally and globally. Therefore, by not disturbing the natural habitation or the wildlife, a nation’s economy can be improved.
Another way to improve economy, by conserving the untouched lands, is to convert the lands into wildlife sanctuaries. These sanctuaries can help build animal hospitals or research centers to study the animals and the natural habitations existing in that region. This could encourage local as well as international researchers and students to study here and can also be used as a tourist attraction .These sanctuaries can be built to become homes to many rescued animals who are angered or held in captive and that have lived atrociously. Recently, an Asian elephant named “Mara” who is almost fifty years old was rescued from a zoo in Argentina, where she lived for more than 20 years, has been take to a sanctuary in Brazil. After being trained to work in a circus at a very young age, she was taken by the zoo and lived there ever since. She finally got her freedom and is living an amazing life in the forests of Brazil. This drew attention of various international reporters and researchers who show interest in such matters. In a similar way, a sanctuary can be used to give so many animals the freedom they deserved and having international exposure could prove beneficial for the nation. The region could also be made into national parks, open for people to visit and explore. These national parks serve and trekking or camping locations. If the animals living in those areas are not very dangerous then these national parks can be use for various other purposes like jogging and walking paths for locals. Doing so will encourage people to visit these parks and have a pleasurable time in the natural and pollution free atmosphere.
That said, a nation must keep the pollution and natural habitation in mind and make decisions that a beneficial for its growth. Developing plans for the locals helps gain a trust level they have for the government and hence help in the overall growth of the nation. Hence the nation, prioritizing the protection of the ecosystem, should implement laws and help grow the economy of the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for example, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 44.0 14.8657303371 296% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 95.0 58.6224719101 162% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4083.0 2235.4752809 183% => OK
No of words: 825.0 442.535393258 186% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94909090909 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.35936686864 4.55969084622 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7330669762 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 385.0 215.323595506 179% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466666666667 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1309.5 704.065955056 186% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 20.2370786517 183% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.545741307 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.351351351 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2972972973 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.02702702703 5.21951772744 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 26.0 10.2758426966 253% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223333608276 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600623595553 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421364494994 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134846243601 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284015267229 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 180.0 100.480337079 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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