Sports events get the nations together and help alleviate the violence in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?
In this modern age, international sports events are assumed to create bond relationships between countries as well as mitigate the violent issues worldwide. I partly agree with this statement and will illustrate my opinions with relevant examples.
Undoubtedly, sports tournaments which attract numerous worldwide participants could benefit nations in two aspects. Firstly, sports events creat appealing playgrounds for athletes from many countries to compete together. After the event ends, they could support each other to reinforce other’s weakness by sending athletes abroad to be trained in high quality environment. Therefore, the negotiations between countries could somehow benefit the development of relevant parties. Secondly, since sports always attract the majority of people, global events would promote the cultural exchange among nations in the world. While the sports stars could experience other foreign traditions, spectators could broaden their knowledge about various culture through media platforms.
On the flip side, the violence happening in the world perhaps can not addressed through sports events and even increased in certain situations. In fact, there are still discriminations towards Asian athletes participating in the international competition such as World Cup or Olympics. In some cases, losing a match, for example a football game, would somehow raise the tension of the spectators that might lead to violent incidents between sports fan bases. Finally, terrorism organisations could take advantages of such huge events to threaten governments by people lives.
In conclusion, the unity and collaboration among worldwide nations may enhanced through essential sport games, however, it could not solve the violent problems that the world is facing nowadays.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'address'
Suggestion: address
... happening in the world perhaps can not addressed through sports events and even increase...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92307692308 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86690976447 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669230769231 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7665568482 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.461538462 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5384615385 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195381170452 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690098796129 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476550218856 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119880029076 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312241723008 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.06 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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