Nowadays young people spend too much of their time in shopping malls. Some people fear that this may have negative effects on young people and society they live in.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
To amuse themselves in their leisure time, young people, nowadays, are spending an overwhelming amount of time in centers and malls. It is a fear that this can bring about negative influences on youth and society. From my point of view, I believe that it has both negative and positive effects.
On the one hand, there are several drawbacks of this trend. First, spending plenty of time in the shopping malls can make them waste a great deal of money on unnecessary stuff that usually ends up being left in the wardrobe. Hence, the young might be overwhelmed with financial troubles when they have to pay for other necessary and important items. Next, shopping may take excessive time in the young’s schedule, thus they will not have enough time to do anything else which is more vital than shopping such as working and studying. As a result, not only can young people present low performances ar work and study but also they can slack off their knowledge acquisition, which makes the national education standard drop significantly.
On the other hand, shopping can bring youngsters some benefits that cannot be ignored. Firstly, in terms of the young, it is considered as a method of relaxation. In modern life these days, young people have to deal with lots of pressure from school or workplace, so this trend helps them enjoy their life and effectively release their stress. Besides, society also benefits from this phenomenon. The increase in the amount of consumption will promote manufacture and commerce in the fashion industry, which afterward will create more jobs and boost economic growth.
To sum up, in my opinion, there are both advantages and disadvantages of this trend of going shopping because it depends on the way young people control the amount of time they do this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, thus, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94370860927 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5932480232 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599337748344 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6714996642 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.642857143 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347089084165 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100363479491 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662579158639 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207485923155 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364626937646 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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