The government's investment in arts,music and theatre is a waste of money. Government should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
The authorities should put money into improvement of civil services than spending on arts,music and theatre as it is a wastage of funds. I partially agree with this statement and will discuss about this in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, government need to spend more money on public services like bus stations, transportations, hospitals and schools. Firstly,the condition of public facilities is little bit poor. For instance,the public buses needs improvement as their seats and condition is not good enough. secondly,if the government will not spend money on schools,it will get difficult for students to get educated. Besides this,much of the poor families are dependent on public services, so if the authorities will not invest on these services,they will be unable to get its benefits. People will not get proper health facilities if money is not spent on hospitals. So spending more money on civil services will improve quality of life.
On the other hand, investment on arts can not be neglected. Many people get their earnings from these subjects. These fields are a good source of entertainment for many individuals. Moreover, these services do not get enough fundings, so if the government will not spend monetary services on these,they will not be able to develop. As a result, they will lead a stressful life. So the funding on these subjects is also equally important.
To conclude,it is essential to spend money on public services as they bring quality life for people but at the same time, funding on arts,music and theatre is also necessary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1640625 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93449605381 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51953125 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2460225355 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.625 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263551877199 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848027222525 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534377323336 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164949020355 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309830617073 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.