Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Sports activities play an essential role in a student’s life. Having sports activities will ensure that students can get mentally and physically refreshed. Some may argue that the same amount of money should be given to both library, and for sports activities, however, I believe that the same amount of money should not be given to both the clubs for two main reasons.
First, if the university has many students who are into sports, then the university would need more money to invest for the students who are into sports than in libraries. University, which has many students who are players or athletics, will need to invest more money in sports activities, such as maintaining grounds, equipment, player’s welfare, etc. For example, In Delhi University, the majority of students are in sports. Consequently, the university has to spend more money on sports activities than for libraries because fewer students use the libraries. As a result, money should be spent more on sports activities than for the library.
Second, if a university has a majority of students who are intelligent and use the library frequently, then the university should invest more money in the library than for sports activities. Libraries need to buy new books to keep the students up to date and have to preserve old texts that can serve as a guide for students. To illustrate, IIT Madras has a majority of students who are intelligent and use the library frequently. As a result, the university has to keep ordering new books so that students can be up to date, and has to buy many books so that students can understand concepts from different views. Since the university has fewer students who are into sports, consequently, the university needs less money to invest in sports activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...ally and physically refreshed. Some may argue that the same amount of money should be...
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Line 2, column 208, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...es. University, which has many students who are players or athletics, will need to inve...
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Line 3, column 754, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s money to invest in sports activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, may, second, so, then, as to, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 43.0788530466 16% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99326599327 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80078422867 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 212.727598566 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.407407407407 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7035966788 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.076923077 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249627009855 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11582949579 0.076458572812 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623872817538 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1891990255 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00897993449281 0.0645574589148 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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