Today we can see overconsumption of natural resources such as air, freshwater, oil and so on. The usage is increasing at a very dangerous pace and is already reaching critical levels. What are the reasons contributing to this? what should be done to minimise the effects?
Today there is a huge lack of natural resources such as air, freshwater, oil and the like due to the fast going industrialisation process. As a result of this, there are many problems that occurred on the living organisms in the earth. In this essay, we can discuss the reasons for this and the preventive measures.
To commence with, the population explosion is one of the reasons for the overconsumption of natural resources. Due to the increase in the population, the requirement of the resources for a living is also increasing. The second reason is that the industrialization. As a result of this humans destroys the forest areas for various purposes such as the to built huge buildings for the business and factories. The waste products from these factories and buildings are carelessly dumped into the water resources near to it, which harmfully affected the people who are using this water as well as it destroys the living organisms in the water bodies. Moreover, the increase in the number of motor vehicles causes air pollution, which leads to various health issues such as asthma and other breathing difficulties. For example, nowadays in Delhi, the capital of India passed through such a crisis situation and many people died. Thus, these are the reasons for the overconsumption of natural resources.
In this century, it is necessary to take measures to culminate the excessive use of natural resources for unwanted purposes. Therefore, the government should take action against the people who are using the resources without obeying the rules and regulations prepared by the government. Furthermore, conduct awareness programme about the necessity to save our earth for the next generations as well as for the better living status of this generation also. For example, use public transportation facilities instead of private cars help to reduce the overconsumption and rush in the traffic. These are the few methods to prevent the exploitation of natural resources.
In conclusion, the main reasons for the overconsumption of natural resources are overpopulation and industrialisation, which are controlled by the measures such as providing awareness classes to the public as well as taking action against the lawbreakers and making new policies to save our earth by the government. We want to think about all the living organisms in the earth when we overuse the resources, it's not only for us but also for every living being and also for the next generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2076.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15136476427 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09144894298 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471464019851 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 653.4 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9777190152 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3888888889 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169088113715 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654605817749 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415732036099 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125542577255 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515435602324 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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