You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or the company which supplied the equipment. In your letter
Describe the problem with the equipment
Explain how this problem is affecting your work
Say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing to let you know about the defective modem I bought from Asianet.
I bought a 25MB modem from your company last week. I had it tested then and there and it was working fine. When I installed it at home, my laptop was not picking up any signal. A further investigation proved that the modem is not supplying any power at all.
This is a very concerning situation as I am not able to do my work. I need a proper internet connection with sufficient bandwidth in order to submit my deliverable on time. I am not able to connect to the internet from the previous 4 days, because of which, I am facing serious backlashes from my employer.
Since I’ve done a full payment, I would need an immediate replacement of the faulty device. Also, please send someone to replace and install the new modem by tomorrow as I will not be able to make it out from my work.
I hope to hear a favorable reply as soon as possible
Thank You
Yours faithfully
Jim Carter
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...25MB modem from your company last week. I had it tested then and there and it was...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43169398907 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55633765249 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639344262295 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.4461024959 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.7272727273 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120473795687 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04590816641 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030531579963 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0477354726928 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376992709208 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.