University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?
A growing number of students opt to study overseas. Although it is tremendously expensive when compared to learning in their own countries, it would give a far wider choice of career prospects besides getting exposed to different languages and cultures. In my opinion, studying abroad is far more advantageous in long run despite of some challenges they will inevitably face.
The greatest benefit of learning abroad is that students will have a wider choice of career prospects for they are passionate about that would have been otherwise impossible if they had have only studied in their own countries. Not all countries provide advanced studies in all areas. Also, some courses are famous in some universities. This will give a chance to learn from world famous institutions according to their competence level thereby ensuring a better future for their next endeavors. In addition to that, it gives plenty of opportunities to learn different languages and cultures. As an example, one of my friend in India wanted to do PhD in a particular field in Information Technology which was only available in USA. Students can broaden their horizons, therefore making it the most beneficial.
However, it is extremely costly when compared to studying in their own country. It brings more financial burden to students. To take control of this, they will have to look for part-time jobs along with studies for meeting daily expenses. It will be challenging to do this in a new environment with different languages and cultures. For instance, my cousin studied MS in Paris had a tough time initially balancing good grades and part time employment. It is often very difficult to communicate with local people in their language and usually people will long to be in the familiarity of their own culture.
Studying international is very common these days. Even though financial commitment would make it a tough choice to opt for studying abroad for some students, they can easily deal with this after pursuing education as they get higher paying jobs. Also, cultural and language exposure will help them in their personal growth. In conclusion, studying abroad is more advantageous than disadvantageous.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 187, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...e been otherwise impossible if they had have only studied in their own countries. No...
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Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
... daily expenses. It will be challenging to do this in a new environment with differen...
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Line 7, column 431, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ime initially balancing good grades and part time employment. It is often very difficult ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, look, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19662921348 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86190053767 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544943820225 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.492522842 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254684186293 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893469993325 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094016984229 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181436742799 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491349054796 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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