Its generally believe that some people are born with certain talent for instance for sport and music and other are not,however its sometime claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sport person or musician.Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Every individual enjoy sport and music. It is a recreational therapy where a specific time period is included in schooling and colleges for refreshment purpose.human being differ from animal where we have the learning capacity.If individual is interested to learn something regardless of time they will soon learn it.
As say goes 'IF THERE IS A WILL THERE IS A WAY' so i believe that we can acquired any talents if we have the interest and hardworking along with proper guidance.People can learn anything if been taught well,but take time to reach goals.Talent is like root of the tree where practices,interest and guidance are like oxygen,water and sunlight which let the talent to grow. for example,this days in television reality singing show the contestant who are interested took participate and work hard,been taught by the mentors.later on they seek name and fame from that platform and entertain whole viewers and win their heart.
Inborn and innate talents help an individual to learn particular thing more easily as compared to normal lay people,but without regular practice and interest,it fail to last long.both music and sport need regular practices. for example, a child with inborn talent with absence of interest,practices and hardworking will not be a successful through out year.
in conclusion any child can be taught to become a good sport person and musician if will power,practices and interest is within.
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Sentence: Inborn and innate talents help an individual to learn particular thing more easily as compared to normal lay people,but without regular practice and interest,it fail to last long. both music and sport need regular practices. for example, a child with inborn talent with absence of interest, practices and hardworking will not be a successful through out year.
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