Many jobs used to be done at home by hand but nowadays increasing number of them are done by using machines instead. discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development.
It is hard to even name an area where technology has not left its impact. Similarly, nowadays household chores are accomplished with the help of machines and this trend has taken precedence over the activities that were being done manually. Further, in this essay, I will shed light on the merits and demerits of this progress.
Looking into positive aspects of reach of equipments to all and sundry for doing their routine house works, i would like to mention that these tools are honest toward their job. Since, these gadgets do not feel like human being and run their errands well in time without causing any threat to the security of the communities at home. In addition to this, significant time saving with the use of these devices is possible because majority of these high tech equipment are automatic enabling them to work without human assistance. this is exemplified by the ubiquitous presence of robotic vacuum cleaners at present are available that can sweep and mop the floor at scheduled time, giving human enough time to concentrate on their new skills. Therefore, gadgets carrying out household activities have great importance in human life
On the other hand, deleterious effects of these technically innovative devices cannot be downplayed by any means. First and foremost affect, these automated devices promote sedentary lifestyle reducing physical activity of human which is already very limited in this technical era. Secondly, unavoidable noise produced by these machines may cause discomfort and sometimes could affect the working of eardrum, an essential organ in ear whose vibration strengthens human to listen to sound of several types . A research has revealed that people using electronic gadgets have high proclivity of falling prey to hearing disorders, especially people of old age. Moreover, it is also it is not possible for everyone to enjoy robots at their services, as one has to learn to teach these machines for doing various tasks which is not possible for everyone.
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- Many jobs used to be done at home by hand but nowadays increasing number of them are done by using machines instead discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16878980892 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61189017181 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627388535032 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.3060811742 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.25 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.75 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179995410119 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622467842228 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416636213125 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12076247186 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181754616873 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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