Charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The chart A & B in combination depicts, the shares of screening films of various origin in UK and Australia cinema market in 2011, while, the graph line enumerates, proportion of admission from 1976 to 2006 in same market.
Overall, the bar graph provide information, US films had dominated others films in both market during the period, and UK cinema market had more admission than Australian counterpart from 1975 to 2005.
In details, as shown by bar graph, the ratio of US movie in Australia is around 65% and in UK over 70%. It shows cleary that, US market had totally captured country’s highest shares in cinema market. Whereas, UK itself had only share of roughly 21% of its own in theater market, while, approximately 5% people love to watch Australian movies. The share of Australian movie in its own country was very tiny, just 2% only, where UK movie had captured nearby 11%. This indicates that Australian people are ignoring their own origin movies. Besides this, others origin cinema shares in UK and Australia was 5% and 16% respectively.
Regarding to graph line, the admission ration of UK is gradually peaking relative to Australian, in whole period. Australian share was between 20 to 40 million in year 1975 and increased gradually during whole period and become highest (around 80 million) in 2005. Whereas, UK cinema admission commenced with roughly 100 million in first year and with little fluctuation in between reached to nearby 160 million in 2005, which is double of Australian cinema market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 221, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'become the highest'.
Suggestion: become the highest
...eased gradually during whole period and become highest around 80 million in 2005. Whereas, UK ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, regarding, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 254.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00393700787 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62822932574 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527559055118 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7626708557 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.545454545 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360120418591 0.215688989381 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147825482542 0.103423049105 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799787824379 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235479588641 0.15604864568 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630618141164 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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