"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Young people are like clay that can be molded in any shape unless kept in a furnace to become solid and sturdy. Whatever the society will preach the them they will inculcate or idealize their life accordingly. Therefore, if young generation will be prepared to compete with one another then negative feelings such as envy and selfishness will reflect as thier prominent features whereas if they would be taught about the cooperation then there are high chances that they will respect the society as a whole. Hence, I am in almost support of the statement that best process to prepare young minds is to teach them cooperation within their domain.
Firstly, it has been widely experienced world wide that whether a country has democracy or monarchy, each government has ministers who help the leaders to take best decision for the country. One of the best example is that, when both opposition party and ruling party came together for the betterment of the society is during COVID-19 pandemic. During this time parties realised that there must be no competition amongst themseleves rather they need to work together for the survival of the mankind.
Secondly, although cooperation leads to the society with optimistic visions, sometimes people has to realize on their own which is better competion or cooperation. It has been mostly observed in multi-player matches where both of the teams are competing so that they can win but when one of the players may get injure, players from opposite team come forward with a sportsmen spirit to see whether the other player is well or not. This shows that the cooperation is above than competition.
Thirdly, there are certain industries where healthy competition is required amongst them so that they can maintain their business. Such industries are mobile producing companies. For countries like India where every type of consumer is present - poor, middle class and opulent, mobile phone companies always compete so that they can target the maximum amount of population. All electronic companies follows similar strategies. Hence, competition might be necessary for industries for the betterment of the society.
Lastly, there might have been industries where competition is consider as the main spirit of the job such as sports, elections, electronic devices industry to name a few but it also necessary to cater the sense of cooperation amongst the young minds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'them'?
Suggestion: the; them
...turdy. Whatever the society will preach the them they will inculcate or idealize their l...
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Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
...Firstly, it has been widely experienced world wide that whether a country has democracy or...
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Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
...Firstly, it has been widely experienced world wide that whether a country has democracy or...
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Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'take the best'.
Suggestion: take the best
...t has ministers who help the leaders to take best decision for the country. One of the be...
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Line 7, column 400, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'follow'.
Suggestion: follow
...of population. All electronic companies follows similar strategies. Hence, competition ...
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Line 9, column 63, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
...ve been industries where competition is consider as the main spirit of the job such as s...
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Line 9, column 140, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'devices'' or 'device's'?
Suggestion: devices'; device's
...b such as sports, elections, electronic devices industry to name a few but it also nece...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, well, whereas, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2026.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 391.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18158567775 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66478473351 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.4539609211 60.3974514979 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.625 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4375 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.21951772744 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206374865047 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668432474752 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431265996355 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104781477147 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172367623876 0.0667264976115 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.