Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think this is good for the world of sport, while others think it is negative. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the salad days of the millennium, the society is polarised into two groups almost equally regarding the notion that whether most of the companies promote sport for their advertisement or other opines that it is worthless. Different people have a distinct mindset. The following paragraphs would shed light on both the approaches before making the final note.
To embark on with the first notion that corporations support the games for their profit, there are myriad things to be shared in their favour. First and foremost, by promoting the products with the help of sports, the agencies gain more profit because when the funded company won, the customers thought the products of a specific company may be good enough to use. As a result, more customers attracted to it. Moreover, the money which they have invested in the promotion, they can earn in a few days and customers also get knowledge about the features of the advertised product.
Shifting towards the second school of thought, some claim that it is the wastage of money spending on the subsidized products. People could not stop them from doing unnecessary shopping. Hence, they burn the hole in their pockets by having trust in sponsored companies. Furthermore, customers do not know about the pros and cons of display products which are being shown in posters. Therefore, after purchasing certain things, they regret it as it is of no use for them.
Having discussed arguments and counter-arguments, I would like to infer that it is good to sponsor sport because people get more knowledge about sports and their team players. To justify my state of mind, there is an instance of the advertisement. Last year, there was a cricket match between Australia and India. ABC company subsidized the Indian team in order to sell their products. Consequently, their sale raises up to 77% within 3 days when India won the match.
In conclusion, I personally feel that although many companies promote sports for the advertisement for themselves. It is expected that the influence of publicity will continue to increase in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05187319885 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75303786758 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585014409222 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.318361241 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2631578947 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2631578947 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63157894737 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171884805479 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449130463802 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611980302913 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102900966963 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468335371491 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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