You have a bank account for few years. Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged which will be taken from your account.
You know this information is incorrect.
Write a letter to the bank.
Explain what as happened and say what you would like them to do about it.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you in connection with my savings account ending in 9009 with your bank. I have been a loyal customer of this bank since 2010. I hold an exclusive gold account and I also have taken a home loan with RBC.
I want to bring to your notice that I have received a letter informing me about an overdraft of $240 in my account, which came as a big shock to me because there has been no money withdrawals in this account the entire month.
Since, I have been at home all of July due to the state-wide lock down, I have not used this account for any purchases. There was a balance of $500 in my account at the start of the month and given that the account was inactive, it is not possible to have an overdraw here.
It baffles me how can your people can make this mistake and charge me for this inconsistency. I would like you to please check with your operations team and resolve this issue at the earliest. Additionally, I would like to know the root cause of this issue to make sure such errors are prevented in the future.
Look forward to a favourable reply soon.
Your Sincerely
Karishma Dave
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...loyal customer of this bank since 2010. I hold an exclusive gold account and I al...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...so have taken a home loan with RBC. I want to bring to your notice that I hav...
^
Line 7, column 255, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...as inactive, it is not possible to have an overdraw here. It baffles me how can your pe...
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Line 13, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...avourable reply soon. Your Sincerely Karishma Dave
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34741784038 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4236540707 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0162085355 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1818181818 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.27272727273 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323245362145 0.216113520407 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106860161247 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603826637048 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147615301723 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843200452006 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.