You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date.
Write a letter to your new boss,
explaining your situation
expressing your concern
suggesting a solution.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter in regards to my offer to join your esteemed organization. I have been requested to start woroking on the 15th November, but unfortunaetly, I will not be able to make it by then and want to request to join on a later date.
I applied for the junior marketing manager position through the job portal and after three very difficult rounds of interview, I got selected for theat role. Although I am thrilled to join this company, I have just been informed by my parents that my sister’s wedding has been fixed and it is the day before my joining date. As this function will be held in Paris, I will onot be able to make it back in time and want to request for an extenstion.
While talking to the human resource manager, I was informed about an upcoming event and that my role requires to be part of thae planning team. Moreover, this event will be one of the biggest event for the year and the entire team will be part of this activity. To help me catch up with this I will be conducting all my training prior to my first day at work.
I would like to request if I can remotely work on this while I am away and be part of the organization meetings.
I look forward to your positive revert at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Karishma Dave
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter in regards to m...
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Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...adam, I am writing this letter in regards to my offer to join your esteemed organiza...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ant to request to join on a later date. I applied for the junior marketing manag...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o request to join on a later date. I applied for the junior marketing manage...
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Line 9, column 361, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...training prior to my first day at work. I would like to request if I can remotel...
^^^^^
Line 15, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...liest convenience. Yours faithfully, Karishma Dave
^^^^^
Line 17, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours faithfully, Karishma Dave
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45454545455 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57198793113 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570247933884 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.9033555671 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152182854828 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708279585326 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498580966465 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934391768372 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555829282228 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.