You travelled abroad and faced some problems at the airport. Write a letter to the airport manager. In your letter provide
- Your flight details
- What the problem was
- Suggest some improvement you want to see
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to complain about a recent problem I have faced at the airport. My name is Rahikumar Patel. I have arrived in Toronto on 12 September night by the flight AK2020F.
I have departed from Mumbai and arrived in Toronto. After luggage checks out, I was told by the authority that I will get my all bags at Toronto, but when I reached the Toronto Pearson airport, I was searching for my two bags for 2-3 hours. At the end, I asked the service employee about my problem and they find my bags at the different section of the airport. Your improper management causes my waste of time.
The airport should have proper sections to find luggage from a specific flight. Additionally, there should be a digital flight luggage tracking system that mitigates effort of the traveler.
Hope next time I will see improvement in management.
Your faithfully,
Rahi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t in management. Your faithfully, Rahi
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 736.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74838709677 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58966166798 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638709677419 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0317892313 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.9090909091 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0909090909 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217746473947 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776950663005 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066457352541 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114657137761 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516512110598 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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