Dear Peter,
Hope this letter finds you well. Knowing that you have an idea to study the Master of Public Health in the Chinese University of Hong Kong (CUHK), as a graduate, I may give some suggestions to you. The Master of Public Health is under the School of Public Health which belongs to the Faculty of Medicine, however, the course is not only tailor-made for healthcare professionals but also general public who worked in related field or just for own interest. You may study in this post-graduate degree either in 1-year full time or 2-year part-time mode. The first half of the course is for generally knowledge on public health and the latter half, students could choose a stream, total 5 streams available, for concentrated study.
Although there are numbers of institution provide similar course, I recommend the CUHK for your best benefit. This is because CUHK always give students more chance to practice what they have learnt than other schools. For the public health programme, candidates will be requested to have a 1-week practicum in a health centre established by the current Director of School of Public Health in China, to experience how public health techniques applies on a group of special needs people. It is worth to do so and no other universities have such arrangement.
Last, you should beware the application period. The application for CUHK always opens early than other institutions, commonly on December. When you apply, you need to submit an essay on why you interested in public health. You may prepare this before the recruitment announced.
Wish you success.
Warm Regards
Samuel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...e for healthcare professionals but also general public who worked in related field or just for...
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Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...s post-graduate degree either in 1-year full time or 2-year part-time mode. The first hal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 937.175257732 145% => OK
No of words: 269.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06319702602 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68616622838 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624535315985 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.8417589911 44.8134815571 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199636422359 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695272763494 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368349621188 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130344145972 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297990583253 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.