Child labor is one of the highlighted international issues. Some countries are strictly prohibited children paid for work by legislation while others still open for this topic. Someone agrees start working in an earlier age would be a chance for a person to gain experience before becomes an adult while other argues that it is against human right. In this essay, I will elaborate points of view for both sides.
We learn knowledge from books but gain skills and techniques from practices. Working environment is a perfect place for children to convert what they learned into their abilities, for example how to get along with people in different age groups, problem solving, critical thinking and handling stress. Money, acting as a reward, could be a good catalyst for them to try their best to do so, experiencing the real world and grow up to be a mature adult.
On the other hand, childhood is the precious stage for a human beings and joyfully go through it is always promoted by international organisations on protecting children, such as UNICEF. Despite the advantage on early working experience obtained, UNICEF argues that right to play is the basic human right for kids and nothing can override it. A joyful childhood bears the role on the development of a healthy person in the three aspects: physical, psychological and social and giving enough time, safe place and freedom to play is the simple and effective way to achieve this goal. Role play, as one type of play, actually fulfill the need for children to practice their interpersonal skill, handling adversity and experience working.
In my point of view, we already have to work for 40 years or even more, it is more valuable to have a happy and memorable childhood than suffering from work for 10 more years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, still, while, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90759075908 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66883877161 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627062706271 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.3914887195 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.916666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328106834024 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112087029541 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781011068189 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194571813563 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729550320629 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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