Your child is going on a school trip abroad for three days and the headmaster of the school has asked any parents if they would like to come along to assist. You would like to go. Write a letter to the headmaster.
In your letter:
Say why you would like to go
Suggest what you could do to help during the trip
Ask some further questions about the trip
Dear Mr. Kelly
I'm writing in connection with the school trip planned for the next month to Windsor Castle and Bath City. While reading the notice regarding this, I came across the request for parents to assist with this trip. I would be happy to be to come along and help in out as much as possible.
I have recently quit my full time job to move to another company in the summer, which leaves me with a lot of free time and I think it will be a good use of my bandwidth. Since my son Noah is severely allergic to nuts, it will give a chance to keep an eye onn his diet.
I also want to let you know that I have been to the castle last year and got a detailed guided tour of the location. So, I can not only advice on the best route to cover the most, but also take the students around myself.
I would like to know if will get some free time during the day and if I can bring my laptop along as I have some trainning to complete before I start at my new company. Also, request if you could let me now the list of duties the school expects from the parents so I can prepare accordingly.
Look forward to your positive revert at your earliest convenience.
Yours Sincerely
Karishma Dave
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Kelly Im writing in connection with the school...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Mr. Kelly Im writing in connection with the school t...
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Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng and help in out as much as possible. I have recently quit my full time job to...
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Line 6, column 25, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ssible. I have recently quit my full time job to move to another company in the s...
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Line 6, column 271, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e a chance to keep an eye onn his diet. I also want to let you know that I have ...
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Line 8, column 195, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding students'?
Suggestion: the surrounding students
... route to cover the most, but also take the students around myself. I would like to know if will get ...
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Line 8, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t also take the students around myself. I would like to know if will get some fr...
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Line 10, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e parents so I can prepare accordingly. Look forward to your positive revert at ...
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Line 13, column 68, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve revert at your earliest convenience. Yours Sincerely Karishma Dave
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Line 16, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...est convenience. Yours Sincerely Karishma Dave
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Line 18, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours Sincerely Karishma Dave
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, look, regarding, so, while, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19230769231 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15279872103 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632478632479 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.828506185 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1818181818 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169759788671 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579175342791 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398907281751 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808190002639 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061028824524 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Kelly Im writing in connection with the school...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Mr. Kelly Im writing in connection with the school t...
^^
Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng and help in out as much as possible. I have recently quit my full time job to...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 25, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ssible. I have recently quit my full time job to move to another company in the s...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 271, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e a chance to keep an eye onn his diet. I also want to let you know that I have ...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 195, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding students'?
Suggestion: the surrounding students
... route to cover the most, but also take the students around myself. I would like to know if will get ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t also take the students around myself. I would like to know if will get some fr...
^^^^^
Line 10, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e parents so I can prepare accordingly. Look forward to your positive revert at ...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 68, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve revert at your earliest convenience. Yours Sincerely Karishma Dave
^^^^^^^^
Line 16, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...est convenience. Yours Sincerely Karishma Dave
^^^^^^
Line 18, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours Sincerely Karishma Dave
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, look, regarding, so, while, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19230769231 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15279872103 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632478632479 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.828506185 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1818181818 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169759788671 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579175342791 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398907281751 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808190002639 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061028824524 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.