The plans below depict the design of University's Sport Centre in the present and the future. Overall, it is noticeable that after reconstruction, there will be construction of new facilities, expansion of main building and enlargement of some old facilities.
Currently, the main building is surrounded by two Outdoor courts on the west and east side. Looking at the inside of building, it can be seen that 25m Pool is located in the middle of the building. Furthermore, other facilities such as Changing room, Gym, Seating and Reception are surrounding the 25m Pool in the West, North, East, and South side, respectively.
In the future, there are several changes which include the demolition of two Outdoor Courts, installment of new facilities, and expansion of old facilities. Firstly, two Outdoor Courts will be demolished in order to expand the main building. Secondly, new facilities will include Leisure Pool, new Changing Room, and Sports shop on the West side, two Dance studios, Sports hall, Cafe and another Changing Room on the East side. Lastly, the old facilities which experience enlargement are Gym and Reception.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24725274725 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.917810053 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549450549451 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7411376874 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.111111111 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124248967565 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595527964004 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916626770262 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105515432144 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940561252767 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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