Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in connection with an online purchase that I had made from your company's website last week. I had booked a study table and chair in reference to your September catalogue in the shade dark brown. Unfortunately, the order that I received is not as comfortable as I had expected and therefore, is affecting my work from home.
As per your website, the equipment that I purchased was mentioned as a regular-sized table-chair set, however, what I received was quite smaller than what I had expected. Despite that, I tried to work with it but was unable to manage my work in the limited space. Initially, I thought that maybe if I use it regularly, it would get comfortable, but later I realised that I was wasting a lot of time trying to adjust myself with it.
I would request you to kindly exchange the table-chair set with a bigger size, else, a refund would be preferred.
I will look forward to hear from you.
Yours sincerely,
Kriti Mehra
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (September) must be used with a third-person verb: 'catalogues'.
Suggestion: catalogues
...nd chair in reference to your September catalogue in the shade dark brown. Unfortunately,...
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Line 9, column 21, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ld be preferred. I will look forward to hear from you. Yours sincerely, Kriti Me...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70520231214 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8327120237 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635838150289 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5403051129 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4444444444 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204553630943 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786280125179 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249095481197 0.0603063233224 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105079209879 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025144250891 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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