In modern society, fashion is becoming more highly valued in people’s choice of clothes. Why? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
These days, fashion takes a sensual part in individuals life. Nowadays, fashion comes everywhere like clothing to even sunglasses and footwear to building also.I think it has negative impact and bad influence on the society.In the upcoming paragraphs, it will define how it negative influence on the society and why it becomes important for one.
To begin with, with the time in trend of modernism, people are blind behind the fashion, because in these days celebrities are main influencers for any new trend and fashion. People follows the ideal fashion influencer and purchase these accessories like that influencer. Which are too expensive. To cite an example, the international shoes brand Puma hires the famous personality Ronaldo as their brand ambassador. Ronaldo has trillions followers, many of them will purchase the shoes, which advertised by Ronaldo. Moreover, in this era, Many companies give the variety of clothes, shoes etc. Which attract people to purchase it.
Further more, I think fashion influencer has dark impact on the society. To elaborate, nowadays such accessories like clothes shoes etc price raised. Which cannot afford by each people of the society. Because of the high cost, in the society it break its equality among people. In the society people give such status to their self and show off in front of others. However, people who can’t afford such expensive things, they may feel shy on their financial condition. Moreover, to purchase such expensive products for get only such status or show off is waste of money and time.
Moreover, fashion is bad influence for society which creates the separation in society such as rich people and poor people. This can effect to children directly, which may cause many changes their behaviour in future towards their colleagues.
Put it in a nutshell, I pen down by saying, fashion trend in clothing has dark side, which is that people nowadays judge a person by their clothes which completely wrong.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, i think, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18633540373 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58341043785 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546583850932 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.94834127 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8947368421 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9473684211 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63157894737 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203150547572 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611394720935 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570515368967 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121015823675 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442113086978 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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