The line chart represents the information about the number of oil use of major consumers from 2009 to 2030. Overall, the use of oil is considerably decreased by 2030 in the US and there is a sustained position of others.
Initially, the major consumer of oil use is definitely the US with nearly 10 millions of barrels per day in 2009. Western Europe and Japan are having slightly 4 millions, China and the Middle East are nearly 2 millions by 2009. Over the next 6 years the US marked the use of oil by remaining stable, but Western Europe and Japan slowly plummeted. China and the Middle East slightly climbed in 2015.
In contrast, the US showed remarkable fall and hit the low at 4 millions by 2030. At this time Western Europe and Japan moderately declined until 2 millions.
China continued to rise first slightly then it remained steadily approximately in 3.5 millions. Middle East also slowly rosen from 2015 to 2030, and reached 3 millions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tially, the major consumer of oil use is definitely the US with nearly 10 million...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '10 million'.
Suggestion: 10 million
...l use is definitely the US with nearly 10 millions of barrels per day in 2009. Western Europe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, then, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71856287425 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62060721988 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556886227545 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.6647178611 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.8 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287656016045 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117889264158 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16250261312 0.0843802449381 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173468184145 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.184340334419 0.0819641961636 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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