The bar chart provides information regarding the proportions of coffee and tea purchasing and drinking habits based on a survey that has been done in Australian cities in a period of 28 days.
First of all, it is obvious that the most popular activity among people is going to a café for drinking their coffee and tea, starting from near 50% for Adelaide’s people and ending at figure of about 63% for Melbourne’s residents. It is worth noting that the popularity of buying instant coffee is more than fresh coffee among citizens in different countries. It means that the highest mark is for Hobart’s citizen in 54% and the lowest percentage is for Sydney’s people in just over 45%, but it fluctuates between 34% and 43% for fresh coffee. Finally, except for Adelaide pattern in providing coffee and tea, all countries’ pattern are similar, meaning the most popular activity is spending time in café, then buying instant coffee, followed by purchasing fresh coffee. However, the pattern for Adelaide is the reverse in the case of choosing a café and purchasing instant coffee.
To sum up, all countries have approximately the same pattern in people’s drinking and buying habits except Adelaide’s people who buy more instant coffee than going to the café.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... instant coffee than going to the café.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, regarding, then, except for, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08056872038 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69885135878 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549763033175 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.4013072313 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.142857143 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1428571429 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2857142857 5.23603664747 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184163195416 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980851260755 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812759908911 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169548491361 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662988610198 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.2329268293 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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