These days, everything is instantly available at our doorstep within minutes. Even though ordering food outside has lots of advantages, its disadvantages should be considered.
On the one hand, ready-made food is suitable for a busy person who does not have time for cleaning and cooking. Cooking at home requires a certain amount of time because it also includes the cleaning process after that which is more time-consuming than the cooking process. Cooking at home also costs significant amounts of water and electricity for the oven or a dishwasher. Therefore, having an opportunity to order food outside would save several amounts of time, money for electricity and other electrical appliances.
Having said that, ordering food outside also comes with disadvantages to our health. Sometimes, it is very common in some restaurants to make some dishes from used and low quality products and cover the rotten scents by adding more chemicals, also to make it more preservative. That would lead to plenty of negative impacts on customers’ health, such as obesity due to using old oil or cardiovascular disease, in the long term, could lead to death. Therefore, even though they are cheap and easy to prepare, they can lead to chronic disease in the long run.
In conclusion, ordering food outside may be an attempted choice for people who are too busy to cook at home but in contrast, those foods could have critical disadvantages relevant to customers’ health which can have major consequences.
- Once children start school the teachers have more influence on their intellectual and social development than parents To what extend do you agree or disagree 73
- It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subjects What are causes And what will be effected on society 73
- In many cities an increasing number of people do not know their neighbours and the sense of community is lost Discuss the causes and give measures to turn it around 73
- Nowadays many people choose readymade foods and refuse to cook at home Why do you think it happens What are advantages and disadvantages of such choice 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17213114754 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90548046215 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618852459016 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3058438023 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.727272727 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1818181818 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151288134288 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582451423513 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515770672558 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988597269046 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514854500831 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.