Some people love to travel abroad for a holiday while some others prefer exploring their home country first.which one of these do you prefer and why ? Support your ans with examples.
Holiday means relaxation from the daily routine and enjoying with friends and family. Recently tourism is popular leisure activity. Many people enjoy to travel foreign countries for vacation whereas others choose home country first. Although both experience are best at its own pace yet I agree with the later statement of initial travelling within my own country because of two main reasons. Firstly, exploring own country becomes cheaper than international trip. Secondly, tourists can experience different cultures within home country.
To commence with, plethora of factors are there which contribute in rising the economy of the country. Among all of them, primarily visit our own nation is a cost effective option as travel expenses is reduced. Layman can afford public transportation at convenient prices to reach at destination.For instance, in india, Individual who wants to experience snowfall and lifestyle of hill station can commute manali rather than international tour.Not only public transportation but domestic flights are also much cheaper than international flights so that middle class family who has tight amd low budget can seek the advantage of it. Consequently,this leads to boosting our own country.
In addition, every nation has its own norms and tradition. For example, India is the land of diversity who has various cultures in its different states. Enormous people attract towards these traditions and culture such as Rajasthan is recognised for its traditional folks. Furthermore, Ladakh is well-known for its beautiful and mesmerizing climate. Hence, By travelling in own country people may get chance to acquire the acknowledgement of his natiin.
In conclusion, however, international tour is also worth of being there but undoubtedly I would prefer my birtbcountry first compare to other National tourism because of its own convenience of transportation and opportunities to enhance and embrace the different cultures.
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- Some people love to travel abroad for a holiday while some others prefer exploring their home country first which one of these do you prefer and why Support your ans with examples 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 214, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to home'
Suggestion: to home
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Not
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61148648649 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06656840199 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641891891892 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.0009870579 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.8125 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.125 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154172714807 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518537604174 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532563179587 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092254433409 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492458625912 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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