to prepare the young people for leadership in government, industry or other field is by instilling in them sense of cooperation not competition.
I hereby agree with the point that to prepare the young people for leadership in government, industry or other field is by instilling in them sense of cooperation not competition because they young people are the future of our country and they can lead the any organization to a great extent.
Firstly, if the young people are prepared for cooperation they will know how to adjust in the difficult situation and how to lead the government, industry or any other field. They play vital rol in the devlopment and will definately give the best results without any as such flaws. Once the young people understand what is the difference between cooperation and competition they will easily figure out what is good for them and what is bad for them.
Secondly, they can easily work on cooperating with other and will get to know how things work, how to maintain relationships among countries or in an industry.
Example - if a young people goes for leadership in government he will give his best and will know how things work, how the things are maintained, etc. They can provide their knowlwdge and all will be in countries favour whereas if young people goes into any industry they will get to know how things work in their sector as of the cost, the better quality instead of quantity, etc. The future will se their ruling without any sort of competition, the future will see how good things work without any problem. Just imagine a young person is working by giving best useful ideas, best of his knowledge without keeping any sense of competition and the world will se the change.
Moreover, they can execute their ideas wich they or any young generation thought to be. Somebody has correctly said when their is competition you can expect cooperation and when there is cooperation the you competition comes to an end as then they will know how to keep healthy relationship among all the organistaions, how to coperate and let others also grow, how to not always be selfish and just thing about yourself only. The change of cooperation from competion will give us the best success rate and will lead to better results but this results can be better seen when the young people and people above them will teach them or make them understand that competion is not everything it cooperation which makes you a rising star. In any field of sciences, personal care, learning, arts, social work and house keeping work will se great demand and will make counry to lead in every aspects.
Lastly, I would proudly say the young generation is the key of better future and I can't agree more to support this great revolution for our young people.
- The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company According to a recent report from our marketing department during the past year fewer people attended Super Screen produced movies than in any ot 50
- The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words 100
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 551, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'giving the best'.
Suggestion: giving the best
...st imagine a young person is working by giving best useful ideas, best of his knowledge wit...
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Line 8, column 122, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...to be. Somebody has correctly said when their is competition you can expect cooperati...
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Line 8, column 200, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'you'?
Suggestion: the; you
...operation and when there is cooperation the you competition comes to an end as then the...
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Line 10, column 84, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ation is the key of better future and I cant agree more to support this great revolu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, whereas, sort of, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2183.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 459.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7559912854 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5183588664 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433551198257 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 654.3 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.341422714 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.928571429 118.986275619 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.7857142857 23.4991977007 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.21951772744 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316974467101 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131500737588 0.0831039109588 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135289634232 0.0758088955206 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209175834609 0.150359130593 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157934626281 0.0667264976115 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 14.1392134831 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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