The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company. "According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies actually increased during the past year. Clearly, the contents of these reviews are not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not with the quality of our movies but with the public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super Screen should therefore allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising.
There are major gaps in this line of reasoning that problem lies not with the quality of our movies but with the public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Look in the world of internet I can't agree with this point that the content and the trailer of the movies is not reaching out to the maximum people as today's generation know how the things work.
Firstly, I would say that if you are not casting good actors, you are not good with the songs, not good with the story line, etc then how do you expect things to be worked in your favour. In today's time when you produce any of the movies you have to make sure that you are good with each and every tactics inorder to supprt your movie, because if you wont care about the mentioned above things then who else will care for your setup.
Secondly, when you are producing movie you have to be sure that no wrong camparison has been, no improper conclusion is there and everything should be perfect, instead of getting positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movie you can just depend on them because you can't say which movie hit their targeted nerve, may be they were there in the same situation like casted in movie so they have good star or you could same thing might have happened with them in past. You should always know the people choices that what exactly public want, what exactly their preference is or you could say what are their intellignce thing, etc. I would like to give an example of a good movie with great story is about to come but after release it is not a great success because of poor songs, overacting of actors, supprting nepotism, etc.
Thirdly, we can come to a point where things are always done in others favour not in your favour as they would give better result. I am not saying that good knowledge among people is lacking but I can also not in favour that the success of any movie depends on the poor judging and mentaily of the people. While producimng movie you always keep in the mind that not only one thing will help for the success of any movie but also there are various facts on which the movie is casted and made for superb results, the movies is the go to free time thing for people but if you are ruining the things for anyone then it can't be a great success. One thing more about these report is that many of the times these reports are collectively wrong and are only a part of pre success of any upcoming so that people get a motivation to go their screens for watching movie.
However, there is major gap and I am always ready for the debate against the problem always lies not with movie but with the public awareness.
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- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words 100
- The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company According to a recent report from our marketing department during the past year fewer people attended Super Screen produced movies than in any ot 50
- The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words
- to prepare the young people for leadership in government industry or other field is by instilling in them sense of cooperation not competition 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ilable. Look in the world of internet I cant agree with this point that the content ...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...you can just depend on them because you cant say which movie hit their targeted nerv...
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Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...y which movie hit their targeted nerve, may be they were there in the same situation l...
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Line 5, column 480, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...ame thing might have happened with them in past. You should always know the people choi...
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Line 7, column 616, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e ruining the things for anyone then it cant be a great success. One thing more abou...
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Line 7, column 616, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...e ruining the things for anyone then it cant be a great success. One thing more abou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2179.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 497.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38430583501 5.05705443957 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04052518277 2.79657885939 73% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.434607645875 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 679.5 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 23.0359550562 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.0309890977 60.3974514979 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.583333333 118.986275619 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.4166666667 23.4991977007 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 5.21951772744 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126712337269 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536303823448 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382876325092 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747674716982 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369872923554 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 14.1392134831 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 12.1743820225 139% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.01 12.1639044944 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 11.2143820225 164% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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