The graphs below show the changes in age structure of population in a European country from 1901 to 1981 and a projection in 2021.
The pie charts provide changes which took place in the age distribution of one European nation between 1901 and 1981 and a prediction in 2021.
Overall, it is clear that the percentage of residents aged below 64 accounted for the most significant number during the whole period. Moreover, while the under 64 section experienced an downward trend, the opposite trend was witnessed in the two remaining age groups.
According to the chart, in 1901, 95% of the residents were under 64 years old, dominating the first place in the ranking. Moreover, this figure remained unchanged during the next 30 years and is predicted to reach the bottom of 79% in 2021.
The trend was totally different when it came to other sectors. Starting with 4% in 1901, the figure for 65-84 age group then increased remarkably to 13% in 1981 and is forecasted to reach 16% in 2021, accounting for the second place in the last period. Likewise, only 1% of seniors were over 85 years old in the initial year. Although the proportion of this age group is also predicted to see a steady growth to 6% in 2021, it still remained in the lowest position.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'section' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sections'.
Suggestion: sections
...le period. Moreover, while the under 64 section experienced an downward trend, the oppo...
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Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... while the under 64 section experienced an downward trend, the opposite trend was ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, likewise, moreover, second, so, still, then, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73096446701 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53188077589 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58883248731 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8143360495 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.555555556 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177941237471 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689009202921 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715655763648 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11948788612 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750081978608 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.