The above flow chart demonstrates the milk and dairy products production and processing for commercial sale.
The process initially started with milking cows' production, and the machines milking twice a day in the grazing cows. The bulk storage tanks are useful to store heavy milk because they prevented them from spoiling. After milk passed into the refrigeration tank, it is stored for some time, or else it is delivered to dairy plants through the cooling tankers. The milk is stored and processed in the dairy for a certain period and converted into two types.
Firstly, the stored milk in dairy undergoes for the pasteurization and finally gets packed into the bottles. Even stored dairy milk is processed into various types of perishable goods, like cheese, cream, and butter, into respectable cans, bottles, and packets. Further, the pasteurized and packaged milk delivered to supermarkets and shops.
Eventually, this the map for producing and processing milk from the dairy plants and converted to the perishable goods for commercial sale.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 118, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ilking twice a day in the grazing cows. The bulk storage tanks are useful to store ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31736526946 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71045243533 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574850299401 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2091935807 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264307909442 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131035079505 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107231394391 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215686543603 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110772391748 0.0819641961636 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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