The most effective way to solve the current traffic and pollution problems in cities is to encourage people to move from the suburbs or countryside into the city centre. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
traffic and pollution problems are aggravating at an alarming rate in modern world. while some people believe that urbanisation is the solution to this serious issue, other hold the opinion against it. this essay will discuss why people migrating from suburbs or countryside to cities is definitely a wrong approach in curbing the problem.
while, urbanisation can be seen as a right path in resolving the concern. it definitely helps in increasing the level of awareness with improved education quality. Perhaps, plethora of non-government organizations and education institutes have been primarily focusing on that. also, major chunk of population living in better planned cities will contribute in mitigating traffic and pollution issues. As per the research, poor infrastructure is major contributor in this problem in developing nations where people predominantly live in towns and villages. urbanisation seems like a short-term solution here.
On the contrary, immigration of more and more people into cities can be catastrophic. Firstly, With higher population, amount of vehicles on the roads will increase exponentially and also, exacerbate consumption of more man-made resources adding to the pollution. Over-populated cities like New Delhi are already facing this fiasco. Traditional and eco-friendly lifestyles of people living in suburbs and villages will be compromised which has always been helpful in abating the traffic and pollution levels. For instance, longevity and health of people living in countryside is always better compared to individuals with fast-paced lives in metropolitan cities. Therefore, urbanisation would be more of a hazard than a remedy.
To conclude, ever increasing traffic and pollution is indeed a serious botheration. this essay critically weighed urbanisation as a solution to the problem and helped to understand that it is clearly a wrong course to confide in since it has grave repercussions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73630136986 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20383072867 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578767123288 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4224585123 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5294117647 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183157614872 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565910644163 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590009818888 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115499100349 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519275542969 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.