You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
-introduce yourself
-explain what is wrong with the furniture
-say what action you would like the landlord to take
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ................. ,
Dear Mrs. Moon.
Hello, I am Darby Shin who contracted rented accommodation with you two month ago. I am writing this letter to complain the condition of the dining table.
I have been living in this house with four family members, my wife, son, daughter, and me for the last two months. Yet, I am not happy with my dining table which is located in living room because it has some problems.
The legs of the table are almost broken. Additionally, it makes a creaking noise when we eat food on the table. It has us to be really uncomfortable. You told me before I moved here that everything is perfect to live and the majority of furniture is almost new. However, there are some problems with the table.
Therefore, I would like you to replace it to another one or fix it. I hope that the table is replaced or repaired as soon as possible. Otherwise, it gets me crazy. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Darby Shin
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It has us to be really uncomfortable.
It make us really uncomfortable.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 10
No. of Words: 173 200
No. of Characters: 736 1000
No. of Different Words: 113 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.627 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.254 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.393 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 43 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 30 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 19 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 10 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 10.812 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.307 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.188 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.307 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.607 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.118 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4