Dear Jaan,
I hereby invite you to my son's 6th birthday that has been planned on coming Saturday 5th December at Park Sheraton Abu Dhabi around 6 PM.
I know you are staying in Dubai and it will be really tough for you to travel and return back. Just pack your luggages for the weekend and have a short trip to Abu Dhabi by Thursday night. We have booked accomodations for friends out of the town in the mentioned venue. It's not too long for you, as you can find Sheraton at the Dubai-Abu Dhabi border itself. Anyways I will share you the Venue in Google map through Whatsapp.
Hope you will be relaxed for a day or two and have a small get together along with our friends. We have planned for sight seeing around the hotel,a small fun event alongside the pool,Karaoke,Disco and Cake cutting with a Dinner Banquet for all our friends. My son will be surely expecting you with his favourite Gift! It would be of great pleasure if you are not disappointing him on his special day.
Glad to meet you this weekend and don't forget to call me once you started.
With Regards and Love
Ajantha J
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...l be really tough for you to travel and return back. Just pack your luggages for the weeken...
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Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...out of the town in the mentioned venue. Its not too long for you, as you can find S...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
...lanned for sight seeing around the hotel,a small fun event alongside the pool,Kara...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Karaoke
...tel,a small fun event alongside the pool,Karaoke,Disco and Cake cutting with a Dinner Ba...
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Line 6, column 35, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
.... Glad to meet you this weekend and dont forget to call me once you started. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41379310345 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39171566394 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660098522167 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9153599692 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4545454545 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223546206118 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882575074267 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039701061353 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105126518922 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070511472698 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.