There is no arguments that tourism bring with huge economic potentials to destination such as currency taxes, jobs. To a certain extent, I agreed that travel is an opportunity to reserve a local cultures and develop the economy system for destination however I also think that the effects of tourism on environment are underestimated.
The gains of a communities where are popular tourist destination is domiciled are endless. in the first place, tourism will undoubtely provide numerous opportunities for both residents and government such as food vendors, souvenir stores, restaurant, amusement parks... with normally promote the local standard of living. The revenue will be injected into the local infrastructure to improve it. As an indispensable Consequence the better facilities bring in more visitors.
In the second place not only does it help the economy development but it also assist local culture. If there are countless visitors, the local dweller will feel more pride for their history and develop their cultural identity to maintain their tradition.
Despite of benefits that come with tourism ,it has left behind a slew of negative impacts on the environment a mass tourism can be attributed to the reasons of soild erosion, pollution and Water scarcity because of overcrowding situation at visitors at the same time on the same land.
Moreover mass tourism so contributes a huge amount of greenhouse gases when the visitors move from one place to another used vehicle It also can lead to the congestion in many cities all over the world.
For this reason we must maximize positive impacts and minimize the negative effects of the tourism for the scale the sustainable development in the future
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'There are no arguments'?
Suggestion: There are no arguments
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...nment are underestimated. The gains of a communities where are popular tourist destination i...
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...t destination is domiciled are endless. in the first place, tourism will undoubtel...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the local infrastructure to improve it. As an indispensable Consequence the better...
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Message: Did you mean 'assists'?
Suggestion: assists
...elp the economy development but it also assist local culture. If there are countless v...
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Suggestion: ,
...spite of benefits that come with tourism ,it has left behind a slew of negative im...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...ors at the same time on the same land. Moreover mass tourism so contributes a huge amou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, such as, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25090909091 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88770777579 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603636363636 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.8744158853 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180078159118 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562357870535 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497754707164 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907080023437 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432531258232 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.