You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words
It is noticed widely that costume is considered one of the most important aspect that the employess should pay attention to when they go to work while others priotitize the worker’s capacity. To a certain extent i agree with the statement supposes that people should be dressed in elegantly in office, in addition i also believe that proficiency is extremely cruicial too.
Firstly, professional working environment can be firmly established by creating professionalism in appearance. Dressing wisely is a factor that promote the professional working style as well as well as increase self-worth in numerous industries and sectors. For example, in some section such as marketing the employess should always be neat and spruce to attract the attention of the customers to add up the profit of the company. A well dressed person can easily make a brilliant impresson at first which is extremeny essential for the later negotiation and communication. Moreover, a perfect appearance can increase the confidence of the employees. As result, with a highly confident morale they can work with all their competence and quality that can boost the productivity of the company possessing them.
On the other hand, appearance is not always a deciding factor for a company’s success and failure. Technological advancement has created a myriad job opportunities for people all over the world no matter how far from the company’s office they are. That means nowadays employees can work and communicate through a computer’s monitor and in this situation, appearance is no longer necessary than the quality. The only things that these employess need to have when working online is their productivity to keep up with the work progress.
Finally, to sum up, it can be confidently stated that not only do the a workers’s have a significant role in the way a work environment is etablished but the quality and capacity of them is also considerbaly important in the modern job market. Therefore, try to adapt and always be subtle to meet the requirement of employer.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... worker’s capacity. To a certain extent i agree with the statement supposes that ...
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Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'as well'.
Suggestion: as well
... promote the professional working style as well as well as increase self-worth in numerous indu...
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Line 4, column 67, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
... be confidently stated that not only do the a workers’s have a significant role in th...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o meet the requirement of employer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21021021021 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0898668267 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561561561562 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0173898845 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.928571429 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9285714286 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129783761634 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044278800774 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.02740261087 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780218074055 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312886512065 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.