Write a letter to your colleague asking for help in setting up an equipment for your presentation In your letter you should tell when and where the presentation will deliver describe your arrangements say him her what equipment you need

Dear John,
Its been a very long time am writing a letter to you. As soon as our high-school studies ended up, we both started to travel in two different roads against our career. First, I wanted to congratulate you for receiving "The Best New Entrepreneur" in the city for this year. Yes, I was very delighted to see this news in the newspaper with your photo last week, and I got your address from that. I am writing this letter to you upon requesting a help for my presentation. Next week, on 30th evening I have an important business meeting with the stakeholders from 2 different country. Getting this business deal will be a n unimaginable turning point in my career. For this I need an equipment from your company with its installation done. I need a projector with latest features and easy to use. I have few presentation to demonstrate to the customers during the meeting. I am sure customers are going to be highly satisfied post the demo. So please bring the projector before 29th of this month and also help in setting it up. Here is my office address- The original, second floor, Techno park , Chennai -600096. You can directly walk-in to my office any time. Please give me a ring before you come, Looking forward to see you.

Warm Wishes,
Krithika

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear John, Its been a very long time am writing a l...
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Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
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...hn, Its been a very long time am writing a letter to you. As soon as our...
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Line 2, column 536, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...eek, on 30th evening I have an important business meeting with the stakeholders f...
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Line 2, column 634, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...country. Getting this business deal will be a n unimaginable turning point in my ...
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...ry. Getting this business deal will be a n unimaginable turning point in my care...
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...ble turning point in my career. For this I need an equipment from your company w...
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Line 2, column 701, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'equipment'.
Suggestion: equipment
...ng point in my career. For this I need an equipment from your company with its installatio...
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...my career. For this I need an equipment from your company with its installation ...
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Line 2, column 780, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...s installation done. I need a projector with latest features and easy to use. I have few pr...
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Line 2, column 825, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun presentation seems to be countable; consider using: 'few presentations'.
Suggestion: few presentations
...latest features and easy to use. I have few presentation to demonstrate to the customers during...
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Line 2, column 856, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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.... I have few presentation to demonstrate to the customers during the meeting. I a...
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Line 2, column 895, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e to the customers during the meeting. I am sure customers are going to be highl...
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Line 2, column 978, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...satisfied post the demo. So please bring the projector before 29th of this month ...
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Line 2, column 1118, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... The original, second floor, Techno park , Chennai -600096. You can directly walk-...
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Line 2, column 1241, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...a ring before you come, Looking forward to see you. Warm Wishes, Krithika
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6592920354 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7691771519 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646017699115 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.5440030878 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.8125 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.125 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0625 4.34317383033 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258595856661 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707762653297 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713667549804 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260792556303 0.12726935374 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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