Some people think that watching movies is a total waste of time To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Some people think that watching movies is a total waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the busy modern world, everybody need a break or relaxation from their regular work schedule. Compared to the past, the trend of passing their leisure time by watching movies with friends, families has rapidly increasing now, and nowadays movies are becoming very educational and informative to the soceity apart from entertainment. though some people disagree to this statement, in my opinion I strongly emphasis watching movies will keep you relaxed and stressfree against your tiresome day.

movies are considered as stressbuster nowadays. there are different groups of people with various opinion who watches the movie. Firstly, some set of people are fan based for a particular actor, director or musician, so they watch the movie irrespective of the story-line, cinematography and other casts crew of present in the movie. this group of people will turn enthusiastic when they see their favourtie person on a big screen. Secondly, there are people who only watch movie after doing a research of the movie review, making sure they enjoy the movie and dont feel disappointed after watching it. Finally, there are other group of people who spend their time for movies in all the weekends , just to keep them away from job pressure. As a matter of proof, it is stated that in India about 40% of the people spend their weekends in theaters especially those who live in metro cities.

On the other hand, movies also share many informative, innovative and technically strong themes rather than fun. there are numerous genre in movies, which attract audience accordingly. Lots of science fiction and cartoon movies are healthy to learn and watch for children these days. children can grasp things easy and quick through movies, rather getting it to know through books or other medium.
To Conclude, though few people doesnot feel passing few hours is not valuable for watching a movie, considering the benefits people acquire by watching a movie, clearly highlights that the advantage overweigh the disadvantage.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, apart from, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1963190184 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63570954553 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601226993865 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1033775936 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.933333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263543222473 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824811544165 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653073934193 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143677642515 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658191477405 0.056905535591 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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