Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Protecting the Environment is the responsibility of the government. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Environment plays a crucial role in evolution of humankind. While some argue that the government is obligated to protect it, I disagree with this statement. In this essay I will discuss why awareness among citizens is crucial in conserving the nature and also the role of corporations and nonprofit organizations to combat the effects of climate change.
There is ample evidence indicating that role of multinational companies is vital in up keeping the living world. The central reason for this is twofold, primarily, industries are second largest contributor in disrupting the natural habitat. Containing the waste along with prevention of toxic gases into the atmosphere will slow down the process of deterioration. Secondly, communities should actively participate in preserving the environment. As government is pre occupied in looking after the welfare of the people and country, NGO’s and communities should come forward and act against the pollution of water and air. To cite an example, a petition carried out by a activist group in Paris against the rape of women had a brilliant reach across the world and bought the percentage of rape in France by 2%. Therefore it is conclusively clear that the fight against destruction of nature seek stronger ally in corporations and activist groups.
Furthermore, despite the laws laid out by the administration it all comes down to people and their mindset towards the surroundings that determine the way forward. The onus is on citizens to be aware of the catastrophic effects on nature as their consumption of goods or services has significant impact in the increasing levels of toxic gases in air and water. It is pivotal that they are mindful of the ways to save the habitat. For instance, sustainable living has to be followed with emphasis of recycling, reusing and reduction of materials that possibly can have adverse effect on flora and fauna of the world. Thus it is possible to state that individuals are the deciding factor in safe guarding the environment.
To sum up, although government regulates the policies to conserve the surroundings, I believe that the responsibility in safekeeping the nature has to be shared by the citizens, corporations and various communities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 668, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e an example, a petition carried out by a activist group in Paris against the rap...
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Line 2, column 810, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...the percentage of rape in France by 2%. Therefore it is conclusively clear that the fight...
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Line 3, column 616, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...effect on flora and fauna of the world. Thus it is possible to state that individual...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2188365651 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08469369804 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567867036011 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7073130418 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.75 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0974184144191 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0302079200993 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05374457127 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061455100858 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378896415183 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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