Many companies are developing boxes cartons and cans which can easily be decomposed by oganisms such as bacteria or by sunlight , sea , water , ect.
Humans are responsible for a variety of environmental problems, but we can take steps to reduce the damage. This essay will discuss environmental issues and methods people can take to address these problems.
The biggest threat to the environment is waste. The air was polluted by waste treatment and then results in climate changes. In past years, the bags made of nylon was used very popular, the people use it to put everything and take away. The amount of nylon waste increased per day, so the way people do to decays nylons bags are buried for self decomposition. But the scientific research showed that nylons were a material difficult to decompose, which spends too much time or doesn’t. The other way was used fire to burn, but the consequence of this resolve is made the air polluted seriously.
Today, the products of the manufacturing industry were friendly with the environment. Many firms are developing production like boxes, cartons, and cans, ect.. use simple material, something can easily be decomposed by an organism such as bacteria or by sunlight, sea, water. For example, instead of used nylon or plastic bags, now the consumer has a trend to use paper bags and cloth bags as long as comfortable and good for the environment. Most supermarkets provide reusable bags for the shopper as well as “ banks” for recycling.
In conclusion, by reusing and recycling, we can help to reduce waste. Every person should also take responsibility for the impact they have on the environment and must play their part in looking after the environment
- The table shows information about the percentage of consumer spending 56
- The bar chart compares the percentage of the cause of stress for different age groups in Canada 56
- The world s natural resources such as oil forest and freshwater are being consumed at an ever increasing rate What are the dangers of the situation What can be done to resolve the problems 89
- The world s natural resources such as oil forest and freshwater are being consumed at an ever increasing rate What are the dangers of the situation What can be done to resolve the problems 89
- the percentage of the cause of stress for different age groups in Canada
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 306, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'decay'.
Suggestion: decay
...reased per day, so the way people do to decays nylons bags are buried for self decompo...
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Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...ction like boxes, cartons, and cans, ect.. use simple material, something can easi...
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Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Use
...on like boxes, cartons, and cans, ect.. use simple material, something can easily b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97709923664 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81045647163 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618320610687 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.828398102 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152108912112 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533334521832 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104699391284 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857788214471 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716124657091 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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