Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is thought that there are different occupations that are appropriate for males and females because of their distinct physical and mental strength. While I agree that men and women have their own individual qualities, I believe that there should not be gender discrimination in employment.
On the one hand, I think that men and women have some distinct characteristics which affect the range of jobs open to them and which traditionally affect their choice of career. As for men, they are strong and decisive, so they are exceptionally suitable for jobs that require tremendous physical strength and agility such as soldiers, workers, and so on. Meanwhile, women tend to favor caring professions because they are kind-hearted and patient. Therefore, they usually take responsibility for nursing, childraising, and taking care of the elderly.
On the other hand, I believe that males and females should have equal opportunities in all careers. The first reason is that women are showing great versatility in various jobs, even those demanding both brains and brawn. They now have equal educational opportunities in many societies and have a chance to go to the gymnasiums to improve their strength, which makes them qualified to undertake the same jobs as men. Besides, men are becoming more responsible for childcare and domestic chores. Moreover, modern views have broken the traditional barriers, which effectively barred men and women from doing certain jobs in the past. Therefore, males and females can do each other’s jobs.
In conclusion, I believe that men and women have different characteristics; however, sex discrimination at work is not tolerated as much as in the past. I myself welcome this change and look forward to the continuation of the trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, as for, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26855123675 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02034372964 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56183745583 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9519379821 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338012619902 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970397614569 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677327516309 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181396075468 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585812574249 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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