Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Since the difference in characteristics between both genders, it is believed that there are some occupations that belong to men and others are occupied by women. From my perspective, I partly concur with this mindset due to both of them having an equal opportunity to opt for their job.
On the one hand, there is a myriad of compelling reasons why people thought that some jobs have been compatible for males rather than females. To begin with, it is an undeniable truth that men have has a good physical strength than women, resulting in numerous tremendous work performances done by men. To illustrate this point, in almost all on-site environments, hardly female laborers work jobs that required a huge consistency in the long run. Women, meanwhile, have been more likely to be better at some occupations that need patience and skill so they tend to do household chores and childcare such as working in almost all education institutions. Take nursery in Vietnam as an example, 100% workforce here is female.
On the other hand, despite the fact that men and women have enormous physical strength, I believe that work has been equally contributed for both genders these days. Apparently, an astonishing number of men have been interested in doing housework and taking care of their children which are conventionally female duties. By contrast, a multitude of women are breadwinners instead of men. They can undertake some jobs such as engineers or gymnasts for men and some of them achieve high results. Besides, women’s social status has improved thanks to the success of world-class businesswomen and politicians, Hillary Clinton for example. This is plain proof against the belief of gender-specific career pursuit.
To conclude, there are no specific rules for occupational compatibility regarding gender thus I believe men and women have no limitations in choosing their job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, but, if, regarding, so, thus, while, for example, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19934640523 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94490867051 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614379084967 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7918692341 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.642857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366397507668 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123580822407 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789666717007 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234076306537 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439002985616 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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