You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter:
• Describe the problem with the equipment
• Explain how this problem is affecting your work
• Say what you want the shop or company to do
Hello Sir/Madam,
I am writing to explain you the problems I am facing with the laptop I bought from you two months back with two years extended warranty.
It was working fine for the very first month but after that, it started creating problems. I believe its battery is not performing well. As a result, it works for 30 minutes and notifies me to charge again.
It is creating trouble and affecting my work in many ways. Few days back, I was attending a meeting with one of the most important client and my laptop got switched off that made a bad impression of my work. As I work from home and there is only one switch in the room that I have to use for multiple purposes so I cannot keep it on charging mode all the time. Thus, it is affecting the quality of my work and I am not able to meet the deadlines.
As it is still on warranty, I request you to send one of your representatives at my home so he can inspect the laptop and replace the battery. Also, I am sending you a copy of the invoice and warranty card for proof as an attachment.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hello Sir/Madam, I am writing to explain you the problems...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, thus, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33333333333 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56048819041 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9849266609 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7272727273 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246977170991 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904157665748 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670179242556 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140824611495 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064212228995 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.