The given six pie charts reveal the proportion of water used in North America , South America , Europe , Africa , Central Asia , Southeast Asia for three different purposes.
Overall , it can be seen from the graph that All the nations used the maximum water for Agricultiral sites . Whereas, Central Asia and Southeast asia used the equal per cent am of water for domestic purpose .
To begin with , 53% of water used for Industrial use in europe . By comparison , the north American used 48% of water for this purpose, other remaining nations South America, Africa , Central asia and Southeast asia were using water 10% , 9% , 5% , and 12% respectively for this work. Moreover, the least water used by all the countries in domestic use nearly about less than 20 % .
Moving further , Africa had the highest percentage of water in agricultural use . It used approximately a quarter of water . Similarly , central asia and southeast Asia also had the maximum percentage about 88% and 81 considerably in agricultural use . Other three nations North america , South America , and europe used the water in agricultural use at about 13% , 71% , and 15 % .
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use
- The chart shows the sports played in Australia in 2003 All figures in percentage 75
- The tables below give information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000 with an estimate of the situation in 2050 Summarise the information 73
- The graph below shows the percentage of urban suburban and rural households in England that had Internet access between 1999 and 2004 59
- The tables show the population density in 6 countries and the increasing rate of urban population in 2008 80
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, similarly, so, whereas, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12432432432 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73807550337 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518918918919 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.4918175055 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 1.69756097561 1944% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307230212293 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155763523578 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425615320918 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211147527524 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181406119011 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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